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stony · 08-02-2003, 04:54 AM

kit, ya verse was more of a rap. not much of a story, no real imagery with a choppy flow. and what was that whole "ord thats cold word thats cold" thing...cut the street lingo, and go read the top 5 peeps verses, itll help ya out. keep ya head up mang, dont give up...
peepers actually showed some kinda story. flow was better too. woulda been a nice verse if ya put some time and effort into it.

vote peeps...one to both

08-02-2003, 04:54 AM	#7 (permalink)
stony ladies sit on grampas lap Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: skill beyond the post count... Posts: 511	kit, ya verse was more of a rap. not much of a story, no real imagery with a choppy flow. and what was that whole "ord thats cold word thats cold" thing...cut the street lingo, and go read the top 5 peeps verses, itll help ya out. keep ya head up mang, dont give up... peepers actually showed some kinda story. flow was better too. woulda been a nice verse if ya put some time and effort into it. vote peeps...one to both __________________ "The Stony One" im a fuckin poet, bitch recognize...