[Resilient.]

Decent battle.

Baysick - Decent verse. Content was pretty simple though. Try to make it more interesting with some better vocabulary use. That can ••••e it up a little bit, and make it more of an effecting story. Storyline was good, and it was funny, creative, and kept me reading. Flow was aight, could've been a little better. Had some multies here and there as well. Good shit man.

Furl - You had a decent story, but I wasn't feeling your flow at all. Bars were much too short to maintain a good flow. Story line was aight, not as humerous. Simplistic content though, as I told Baysick.

Both need some work here and there, but it comes in time.

Vote - Baysick