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Find a good ending line. Try and edit your verse so that it has the message you wanna convey, and find a good way to end it... like putting something that puts the verse in perspective and adding *oomph* to it as well.
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http://www.myspace.com/wwwkawlinzcom
8 lines or less - including spaces
size 5 font or smaller
no outside links except soundclick, myspace, dmusic
-from janitor himself, I'm within the rules
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