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ShockMania:
Ds'll bring forced punches..and whack rhymes i bet..
followed by the 'shock' disses..he used last time we met..(lol)
btw..i've thanked kaleef endless times..
puttin me against you in rbl..i never knew he was a friend of mine..(cool)
drinkin sucks? i'll try this fag for size n'..
the herb joined milita..goodluck in advertisement..(lmao)
im'a use one syllable rhymin..like ds's ghost writer..
im oon the road to success..and i dont take hitch hikers..(haha)
thas why ya dont flow^^..ya rhymes are jus normal cousin..
on his pic he got his hood up inside..coz there's always a storm above him..(nice ending)
the verse had some good punches and personals..I liked the flow..and overall the verse was straight for a battle verse..
8.4/10 blood drops
DS:
Ill beat u quick, with out delays
ull need the full extent
just so u have time to search & flip more cliches
i say, ill take this battle for what its worth
and pass through LA
faster then Manic Ds family movin up North(lol)
shoulda been aborted at birth, village idiot
watch u perform live
ur a spitting image... of shit(aight)
whats with it? i watched as u fell
i thought u held guns?
but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL(nice)
got a Ace up ur sleeve kid? ima expose this bore
cause from what ive heard
ur nothin but a Queen behind closed doors(decent ending)
i didnt like how u opened up the rhyme but the flow and the punches were cool after the first two lines...I liked how the verse was set-up...had some creativity...nice verse..
8.3/10 blood drops
this one was close...
vote: shock(by a inch)
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