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Yeah, they're givin' you good advice.
You should also get your typin' format down. Don't end a line everytime it rhymes.<---(lol.. I noticed I rhyme alot even when normal writin' & speakin'...it's habitual)
End it where the bar ends. You seem to be on beat but if by chance you just happen to be lucky and don't know what a bar is, just check my "...Barz" post on here.
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#1 Cypher Emcee (July 03)
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