[birdawg]

okay I posted this in open mic but I didn't get any feedback, just rates n' shit...how am I supposed to elivate if I don't know my mistakes????

--peace

Imagine being alone cold having no one to fall back on no one to care you were even alive

Yo, Can you imagine the sheer pain//
of nothing ta blanket you but the rain//
it's an insane range from shame ta rage//
he's the legal age ta carry a 12 gauge//
unleashed like rabid pits from a cage//
he comes he goes he some times stays//
in his emotional maze for days n' days//
he just prays n' prays ta god he'll die//
a quick n' painless death crystal meth//
addictions caused friction until conviction//
drug addiction caused eviction what a position//
should a saw a physician or got some help// (to late)
unlocked, cocked he blew back is scalp//