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gimme some feedback
i was writing this to a beat you can check it out at mp3.com/Auditory it's called language of the night... theres also some dope songs - Connection 619/Tension in the club/Rugged Electricity
this is like a first verse... each of the end words should land on the hit (bar?? or is a bar 2 hits?) gimme some feedback...
im the tombstone of those
who never made it
died struggling faded
into the fabric of time
now that theyre gone they remain
on nobodys minds
i speak beyond the grave
sending chills down the spine
bringing the dead to life
immortalized (doesn't land on the hit fully)
among these lines
the individual died
maybe leaving nothing behind
but the struggles defined
my chapters your chapter
we on the same page
trapped running the wheel of bullshit
like hamsters in a cage
dieing with no name
no money and no fame
disillusioned in this game
reaching out to be saved
shits easier to say than do
its so hard to change
when your caught up
in this life of crime
you never know the night
when your going to die like
right now your alive
tommorows yo last moment of life
i wonder what its like
to be goin up against death
taking that last breath
reminiscin on past sins
hopin to be forgiven
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