Thread: my 2nd song writtin rate 1-10
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Old 06-10-2003, 12:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!krysto will do you doggie style!
7/10

Flow was nice..still kinda on the simple side..an could use some originality

try to step it up on the complexity..vocab..methaphors an explore some unventured territory if u can
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