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what do you think?
i'm new to this and this is one of my freestyles I want to know what you guys think and if its bad could you give some tip on how to improve .
By:ToÞþ-notcH
The cerebro cortex is deeper than a universal vortex/
squeeze on emcees tighter than a corset/ my imagination
spans wider than global war fare/ snatch the mic quicker
than a woman's horse hair/ spit blades from throat- severing
limbs from the body/ give you a lesson in anatomy/ then return
your appendages to you in freshly baked pottery/ my mental
vocabulary is steadily surpassing thee/ capacity of human
standards written down on data sheets/ I'm a speak my peace/
you n###a's is weak/ let cats on the street beware of
my presence/ cause in life you learn a few of it's lessons/ I stand
alone butll fight against any weapon/ don't step or we might be reckin'/ push me to close to the edge and I'm a do what I feel is right/ even if it means the end of my adolescent life/ know n###a's that aint afraid to die/ or afraid of heights/
even if their hanging over a cliff with 100 feet of 10,000 razor sharp spikes/ they send their enemies on a hike/ never to be seen again until you travel to the after life/ stealin guy's wives/ always straight never triff/ wound up gettin sliced twice/ but thats a different topic for another night/…
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