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Old 05-31-2003, 05:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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JJ-Your lines were uhh short...but you had some nice punchlines, and you took this with a more graphic, entertaining verse..i liked the spine line, and the closer was pretty okay

Wizdom-First Off, nice verse, you definetly had some good lines, but you played of JJs verse on a few different occasions, but you also had some nice punchlines..
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