Got Life? - While this shit was kinda hard to follow, it was still a fuckin' dope concept. I like how you flipped the topic honestly, that was my favorite part of your verse. Your flow and your rhyme scheme continue to improve, they were especially sick right here,
Quote:
Oh my bubbly jitters at the end of adolescence,
Guide me ‘cross a field by the moon’s luminescence,
Gone were cartoons and afternoons in the essence,
I was left to the fate of my platoon’s indiscretions,
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Real nice. Anyways I wish this shit was a little easier to follow, your wording was shaky, and that was kinda unexpected. Just seems like an off week for you in some aspects, and on in others. Real dope piece though, I enjoyed it.
Infinite Truth - Another piece that was slightly hard to forward. Your mechanics were better than GL?'s, but that was expected, I think your mechanics are tops in the league, besides mine of course ; ). I liked what you did with the topic, it's probably what I would've done honestly. All in all it was a cool verse, it had a cool theme to it, but I didn't really get much out of it. I wish you put more emotion and meaning into this piece cuz it woulda been dope if you developed the concepts more.
Vote - GL?