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this battle was the bes i read so far
vada u the man .. ya opening bars really drew me in .. i felt this topical was well done .. very classy too.. what i would have liked to see .. is a bit more flow .. if u would have had that illy rhyme scheme this would have been second to none
3planes this was hot too bro .. i really liked your rhyme scheme compared to v's. so to me these pieces were damn near two of the same kind .. thats why it's pretty easy to choose a winner .. yours started off very elegant and classy with good mechanics but by the 2/3 it had fell elementary too v's.. ur a talented fuckin dude though.. keep writing
v - vada
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RSTL CHAMPION OF SEASON I
Yes, as in the entire season.
A bitch tried to stick me
Cause you fuck me don't mean you can kiss me
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