[Cereal_Killer]

Inf:
Hah man u showed.. lol.. good shit dude impeccable flow, very creative and original wordplay with a heavy set of emotion.. The way u structured this verse it came off more like poetry then a rap story but at the same time it reads off a lot faster giving the action sequences more of an urgency feel – which I liked so.. Pretty dope drop dude.

Mr:
Ok im def up for the topics u chose cause at the start I couldn’t choose which I wanted to do out of those two.. So I don’t really think u meshed the topics together well – im like coo coo for 3/4’s of it some busted ass lines but nothen major…then the last few bars were like u started sniffing the coke u was writing bout n your structure n rhyming abilities got thrown out the window.. It was n ok verse n you def have potential as a writer I just think this suffered a lil towards the end.

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For an all round better piece.. gl yall