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Inkwell: Well ok this was a good verse, I mean the flow was there and so was the rhyme scheme, but to mer it either felt like you didnt take that long to work on it or you just rushed it, and then you tried to make a nice ending but at the end, I was just like "OK".
Seph: O now I was feeling this verse all the way through, but the ending fucked me up, I mean does the 2 mean that he killed two people, I am in suspense wondering what was on the paper.
Vote: Seph for having a more entertaining verse
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Dougie G-The Return-Jook
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