[Got Life?]

well...

I don't expect this will get many votes because Baron is a pain in the ass...

but yea...

Baron - this verse took forever and a day to read...the subject matter was just really dry and slow...the progression just made me wish that you'd get on with it and get on with it...instead it just kept moving at a crawl...the progression was actually enjoyable though so I'll give you that...to me you could have executed this in much less bars and with a tighter flow and it would have been a lot better...there was to much filler.

Seph - this was yours to win, but you lost it...or well, you didn't really execute...I think you tried to hard to use the pictures so literally, and I also don't like people that feel the need to take pics that weren't provided in the actual topics...in reality...the only pic you needed was the last one...but whatever...I think you sacrificed a lot of content for flow and I think in the entire piece you barely developed the character and really said nothing.

to me this was a great let down on both ends, but I think Baron had a more clever piece that he definitely put more work into.

vote = Baron.