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Nice battle gentlemen...
Ink...the story wasn't bad. neither was your structure but the flow dragged at times and it was spacey...I feel like Life a lil bit. You left some questions unanswered like you lost imagination. an extra 10 bars of explanation would've helped. I stopped reading to re-read and make sure I didn't miss that part but it wasn't there...that's my only problem with it
Kid...the story read well in my opinion. I really liked you structure and imagery. The humor was alright to me, not really distracting but sumtimes it wasn't necessary. It flowed well and you just overall had a better verse
v/kid
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