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Daht: I fucking loved the drop. A verse sorta revolving around the last man on earth theme can either be easily predictable or hard to follow. I think this wasn't a major upset in that theme. However, sometime the story did KEEP my interest. Towards the middle I wanted to skip straight to Life's verse, but ala in all, it wasn't a disappointment....
Life: Man brudda, peep: I read the votes before I actually voted, and I have to say, I don't necessarily agree with the statements made about the "twist" in your story. If this battle was truly neck-and-neck, that twist wouldn't have been a deciding factor (for me at least). But, you're story was easier to follow without the expense of being basic. You get kudos for that...
Vote= I suppose if I HAD to choose, it would be...Got Life? Only due to the fact that his verse was more entertaining. I think neither of you had any underlying theme or conclusion besides "This is fucked up, oh well, accept it." But good battle nigs!!!!!!!
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