[King Grimet]

Vote - Ink..

Kid - I didn't really every get interested in the story, it seems like it was not a complete storyline really. Towards the end you just got delirious or something and tried to make it funny when the rest of it was nothing comical. I just didn't really enjoy the read too much to be honest.

Ink - Dope, The flow and structure of the verse was amazing. The story flowed smoothly from point to point. Stayed on topic, stayed with the same tone, same style, & told the story well. The story itself was kinda lame, walkin in the sand and then end up lost lol.. You could be more creative on that note, but I still loved the ability you displayed tellin the story, even tho the plot of the actual story was a bit lame.

Either way Vote - Ink.