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daht cahm: Ok well first of all like i been saying all day today, i think you got lucky with the way the ranking went down, and i dont think you should have gotten a number one contender's match this early, but in no way am i saying you are not a good writer, now this verse right here was another awesome verse from you, just like the one from last week, i mean the flow was on point and you kept me entertained all the way through, but u know what i have learned about ur style after reading those two verses, you just give it to the reader, to do with it what they like, and what i mean by that is, there's like no set up, no twists, you just throw something nice out there and that's it. I mean dont get me wrong it was rhyming beautifully and i loved the dialogue.
GOT LIFE???: ok to me the rhyme scheme is this verse was very basic, and in the beginning it was taking me nowhere but you know what saved you ass, THE TWIST!!!!, Damn that was one of the best twists i have ever seen
vote: Ok now let me tell you something, being that i am first to vote on this, I will say that maybe everyone else might not agree with me but at first Daht Cahm almost pulled off the upset, He almost got Life, but that Twist saved his ass. And you wanna know why, Got Life you son of a bitch, I faced you last week, with the same exact idea, not as good but the same exact idea, you practically did what IV told me to do. Any ways vote GOT LIFE, good fucking battle guys, very entertainig.
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The Republican Party
Dougie G-The Return-Jook
NO-SHOWS ARE FOR FAGS
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