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Tough vote.
Although people seem to be commenting on the the idea of the scenario Inkwell used, not as a story lead like I guess some of you think it should be...... that doesn't deter me from enjoying his submission. It's still a disciplined writing, he stayed on topic the whole time. Maybe a lack of creativity in expanding, yes, but we could have all done the same thing and the verses would all still be done differently. There was still some originality to it, it flowed well, and I don't have any complaints. It was there, and there was enough detail to call it a story as opposed to a summary.
As I said, this is a tough vote... I wasn't completely into Insanevillain's verse. Parts of the story were over expanded with details that were kind of clever but just.... i really don't know... one one hand it's hard to say how everything in this verse connected... but on the other hand, the main objectives of each verse or at least the topics of each verse connect together to bring us to the end and learn what we're dealing with. it seems like the outline is more important than everything in its entirety. i guess though if you remove all that stuff, it doesn't really take away from the piece anything important because it's still inserted into your verses somehow.... and that makes it progressive. i'm not sure that doing all the titles as an outline does anything positive, though it is cool to see how you did that, but you could have progressed the story better without them maybe.
i guess my vote goes to Insanevillain, but not by a landslide.
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