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Old 03-02-2008, 11:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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nice imageries. I like what you have done so far, I don't know if you are going to expand on it or not, but one thing that you may want to incorporate into your poems are more sensory images, they are always fun to play with. I appreciate the share
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