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I apologize i only have a short period to vote but here it goes...
Pain, well first of all i'm gonna say this... i am biased against most love stories but this one was cool... nothing amazing in the content but overall good emotion and easy to follow...
Eye Rhyme... iono, i saw the rhyme scheme in the flow, but there was ALOT of description almost overkill... i think you could have added more to the story to make your twist a little bit more special...
at the end of the day i vote...
Pain... i like joe kraq's imagery but pains verse inched it out with easy to get into content...
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