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I liked reading both these pieces...
Got's verse was a little different than the previous verses I've seen, but I settled into it pretty quickly. There's something about it that comes off so sophisticated.
I think one of the major differences between the two pieces was the way they each flowed, and Got's piece picked up the slack where Seph may have overshot his boundary. My example has nothing to do with the "6:00 pm, 7:00pm," not sure whether it really affected my reading, as I didn't read the "O'clock" and I'm not sure why anyone would. What I noticed right from the get go was the use of "unrecognizable" right at the end of the first line, and the follow up of trying to multi it in the next. I think that springs upon you and it's like getting over a hump before you start riding smoothly down the verse... except it wasn't smooth all the way through.
Seph was good at showing the tone of verse and keeping it there, no hump in trying to establish the mood and uphold it.
I think what MetaSin said about Got being articulate definitely rings true. It always seems to play a factor.
Vote = Got Life?
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