[MetaSin]

i think both topics were equally common... so in regards to execution I'm a little bit torn here.

Got Life- You definitely articulate emotions well, and you play to the sense well also. Your vocab comes off as intellectual, yet fluid. The dialogue is adds to the depth of what you're actual verse is saying, but it makes you sound pathetically in love or on the rebound after being broken-hearted. It was almost funny to me, but I don't know if that was your intent. It was very short also....

Seph- i loved the flow and feel of your verse... i also think that although your concept wasn't too original, it mirrored my first mental image of what i would write about looking at the picture you chose. I think in the end, that'll be the biggest downfall... I chose not to do the topic, because i felt it wouldn't have been that creative had I gone that route. I think you did it well, but halfway through the verse it just wasn't as interesting, almost like you were rehashing the ideas over... Still a good verse...

vote Got Life cuz i liked the way in which he did his topic.