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vote- IV... Inkwell's verse flowed very well, but I was under the impression you were supposed expand on the scenario, i.e. the family's reactions, etc... You told us in rhyme form, exactly what your topic did... Dissapointing cuz you would've probably got my vote otherwise...
IV's wasn't bad, and the twist at the end makes sense, tho a very surprising twist. I think the thing that got me, was i didn't really like the rhyme structure or flow of the verse. It kinda plodded along until the end. But you stuck to the topic, and seemed to describe things relatively decent.
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TMUPrecision "Ol school vibe, cuz I'm smokin reefer... and the blunt burn slow, like ya soul on ether... listenin to nasty nas and jay.... cuz ion like what other rappers got to say... blueprint, stillmatic, and yea I'm still at it... cats is lookin at me like I'm a real addict... cuz smokin that green is a real habbit... folk call me knowin that I will have it..."- Loot
You don't wanna see the drama I could really Bring... I'll let that milli ring and turn ya body into silly string."- Loot
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