[Quriosity]

craccer_jacc, i am thoroughly impressed with the show you put on here, this verse was somewhat captivating and delivered the "beautiful" vibe well, the flow was damn near impossible to catch but i did find a rhythm as i read which helped aid the progression however in future matches you should allow the structure/format to direct the reader seeing as how we have no clue of what you actually had in your mind most will struggle to put this together and fail and therefore you will never receive any credit where credit is due, aside from the horrific format however the flow was actually there along with good imagery and unusual descriptions that really worked here to set the tone and mood of the story, the story in itself was actually a good one that seemed to "beautiful" at first with love in the air and each captivated by the other and the murder scene was very discrete and never lessened the tone which made for a great ending, in the end i liked this and i see potential shine right through your words however the structure does kind of take away from the impact, good drop though and i hope you stick around, i cant wait to see what you turn out to be in this league

condescending, i disagree here completely and feel as though somebody is getting robbed due to a neglect to conform, in the end this verse was very bland and the content was very simple and cliche', nothing new was offered here and the entire story lacked any type of depth, i mean you basically describe someone who was in the streets hustling and later cleaned themselves up and helped the homeless, you never dove into the actual character or gave a reason for his troubles or anything that would have offered something to the reader, there was absolutely no connectivity for me here as i felt this verse was wasted space, all in all you delivered the content fairly well for what its worth but the story/subject matter has been over done and your flow was even inconsistent, i just dont see it here, i mean i felt that you lacked creativity out of everything else in which your opponent i felt excelled in, decent verse but you need to do a little more, spend a little more time on the idea and development of not only the story but the character in the story and offer the reader something new or give them something to connect with, emotions or vivid imagery or consistently smooth flow or something, i felt you failed in nearly all of these categories and only accomplished producing an overusued subject in a mediocre manner

overall, i think this battle might be a tough call simply because some might not have the patience to read craccer's verse with an open mind, but of pure skill i feel as though he displayed the most through his creativity, his flow was also just as well as con's once you caught it and his imagery/descriptions/wordage was above the opposition, the entire story just offered more opportunity for the reader to connect to the words and the ending was spot on, therefore i vote - craccer_jacc