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good battles, a couple of short verses. bonnie your verse was very enjoyable, made you think, but was actually solveable unlike mementos. well, unsolvebale is too strong, but it was challenging. the form was creative too. memento if you would have wrapped your verse up better, maybe a few extra bars or what not u might have got this.
vote - bonnie
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Inkwell
Spontaneous Bop Prosody
Consider my verses word bombs.
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