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seph - the first half of your verse was great. the second half not so much. i was really digging your verse, the points to left and right thing.. fire... but then it fizzled out.
got - i liked this quite a bit actually, the speech interjections were tight for me as Q started to pick up on a ways into his vote. your a good story teller, good imagery, writers voice, if only you could rhyme worth a damn you'd be there bro :P
vote - gl
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Inkwell
Spontaneous Bop Prosody
Consider my verses word bombs.
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