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cracc - very interesting. i didnt hate the structure as much as the other two, i thought your flow was cool and your style is totally unique, refreshing even, had a sort of slam poetry feel to it. in fact i wish this just would have had some profound artsy ending, although i do appreciate the artist being the most vein of all, breeding sin and what now, keep at it man your on to somthing here.
con - yea a good take on the de ja vu topic. some good multis in there, you definately could be a top writer in the league with a little more growth. pretty good verse.
vote - con
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Inkwell
Spontaneous Bop Prosody
Consider my verses word bombs.
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