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Insane Villan: Your verse didnt really appeal as your flow started off nicely then slowly got worse as the verse progressed. You had some nice lines but I saw how you tried to tie different topics in together which was was clever idea but don't think you covered overall topic very well. Not a bad verse fam I think the flow could have been improved in areas.peace
Inkwell: This verse was good and I liked how you progressed the topic throughout. The flow wasn't nothing special but you had a nice few multies tied in there that made it read easier. The story kept me reading and I Liked the idea of the storyline before I started reading it. Overall a decent piece fam,peace
Overall vote= inkwell as I thought his verse was better in all departments
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