[Quriosity]

Stars€reen, this verse was average in every sense of the definition, but not average based on the skill level of this league seeing as how we have a vast mix of very skillful writers and a few wack writers, but just an average verse subject wise and everything, the content in itself was very uninteresting and somewhat confusing with the flashbacks and whatnot although i did grasp the action it wasn't necessarily conveyed well, however the progression of the story was great, you moved the events seemlessly and never sacrificed content for something else, its just that the actual story was immature although you progressed through it well, the flow was pretty good for the most part all though there were times that it seemed iffy, in the end this was just an average verse, nothing good but at the same time nothing terrible, had you had better subject matter and progressed through the story with the same ease you would have put up a good fight, the mechanics need minor tweaking as well and it helps if you proofread but overall this was decent

metasin, progression was done equally as well if not better seeing as how the flow was smooth throughout the entire verse, never extraordinary but just smooth enough to keep the reader going, the story in itself was somewhat slightly creative but really nothing that hasn't been done before, i liked how it started and the imagery was good, the emotion was there as well, again nothing spectacular but more than enough to keep me reading, the strongest point was the flow and story progression, you moved through the events with ease while never letting up on flow and you also flowed flawlessly without ever using unnatural words or sacrificing the content/subject matter for flow, overall this was still just good and definately not great but the potential as a great writer shines through, the script was more interesting than the drug/traffic story and the flow was smoother which rates this story higher in my memory as opposed to the opposition

overall the decision was easy although both parties showed up and had there pros and cons, vote - metasin