[Baron Mynd]

I wasnt a great fan of Star's verse this week, like everyone already covered, the negatives to the verse really overshadowed the positives which was unfortunate for you here. The imagery was actually pretty good, you should play to that strongpoint in the future and build around that. Make it a key feature to your pieces, because some opponents in the league cant do that as well as you can... Also, like mentioned previously, the mechanics behind the verse werent up to standard this week, the whole thing seemed keyed up and posted hastily as I read it where as with Meta's its clearer he took more time to develop it and get it into a good state before posting. Its been a looooooong time since I read an actual MetaSin topical. Reaching back to El Dub I think haha! Good to see you writing again man. This was a pretty colid drop, flow is cool, lose the // at the end of bars though. Lol. Its cool for audio, not so cool for text... Ive seen you mention this female Jade before too, is it someone your actually seeing? Creepy. Anyhow, Meta did more than enough to take this battle here. Star has a few signs of potential, but he needs to really nurture those and play to his strengths when he writes. If he can do that, he's slowly start picking up a few victories around these here parts, he's just been a little unfortunate to face someone like Meta in his first week here...

Overall, MetaSin did enough to win this for me.

Peace!