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Star - Wasn't a huge fan of your verse. You did have some positives, some pretty nice imagery, but the mechanics were sloppy, and for whatever reason, the verse just couldn't draw me in.
Meta - I think this battle is pretty clear, thus the brevity of vote. You had a very solid story and a nice take on the topic, plus your mechanics were well ahead of stars.
Vote - Meta...
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I don't mind, not bein' known,
But bein' an example that will only be cloned,
I don't mind, bein' myself,
Even if it holds me from possible wealth...
O.G. Bad Guy
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