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Bonnie - This shit was pretty amazing for such a short verse. I esp. love how you used your topics, that was very creative interpretation. This was almost like a short story and less of a rap verse, but it was an incredibly well written short story. Your flow was very nice for 99% of the verse, I can really only find a couple of lines that don't really fit the flow of the verse, and it's def not enough to take anything away from you. Your rhyme scheme also came and went throughout the verse, but I didn't even really notice, your content was so intense. Overall, a very creative, well written verse.

Mem - You've surprised me over the past two weeks, I honestly didn't think you were this good of a writer. Your style of writing is very unique and it's a lot different from any other writers in this league. I wish you would work on your flow more, because some of the lines are terribly stretched. Mechanics aside, your abstract style of writing is very nice. I wish you would develop more, just add a verse full of relatable imagery, add some sort of concrete-ness to your verses, and you'd be a beast. This was a very hard decision, and although your verse was very dope, I think bonnie had the better overall verse. Work on your mechanics and you'll be a top contender.

Vote - Bonnie...