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Got Life? · 02-29-2008, 04:14 PM

craccer - this was all over the place, the structure really threw off the piece with a really shaky and terribly broken up flow...the lines you used for repetition weren't very good and didn't help the piece...there was a major lack of transition throughout the entire piece...there was just a total lack of clarity and focus here.

con - I don't know what it is with you, you seem to come up with a decently clever idea and just never carry it out...this verse lacked development...lacked a solid flow...it lacked direction or any clarity as to how he turns his life around and everything...

with that in mind i'm going to vote for the verse with the most clarity.

and that is...

vote = Condescending because Craccer_Jacc was all over the place.

02-29-2008, 04:14 PM	#6 (permalink)
Got Life? The Fuckin Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: In a place where people don't judge me for drinking vodka by the gallon and taking advantage of 18 y/o highschool girls Posts: 11,360	craccer - this was all over the place, the structure really threw off the piece with a really shaky and terribly broken up flow...the lines you used for repetition weren't very good and didn't help the piece...there was a major lack of transition throughout the entire piece...there was just a total lack of clarity and focus here. con - I don't know what it is with you, you seem to come up with a decently clever idea and just never carry it out...this verse lacked development...lacked a solid flow...it lacked direction or any clarity as to how he turns his life around and everything... with that in mind i'm going to vote for the verse with the most clarity. and that is... vote = Condescending because Craccer_Jacc was all over the place. __________________ Confusion ensues... Like damn nigga... Ain't you read the day to day news...