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Pain - this was by no means my favorite piece from you, but at the same time you definitely brought a killer flow and strong writers voice to the table. Also I really liked the take you put on that topic and flipping it into what you did with the piece. To me it worked and showed better mechanics and a more thoughtout conclusion.
Q - arite man I see what you tried to do here, but c'mon...the first 10 or so bars was just a lot of rhyming, but it was all filler, just like most of this piece and you used a lot of the easiest rhyming words too, it was a real cop out to me. Plus at the end of the day I figure you thought you were gonna die from an STD so you killed yourself before your daughter was born, but there's really no explanation or clarity behind the piece, it was just really blah to me.
I think this battle was Q's to win, but his piece didn't have the depth to carry it out.
vote = Pain.
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