[Got Life?]

Bonnie - this was a cool verse for what it was although I'd really like to see you put more effort into your pieces and climb out of the same zone that you always seem to be in...the flow was butter though and I like how you hit on the deja vu topic by using the repetition in your voice although at the end of the day this piece lacked depth to bring sense and clarity to what was really going on.

Mem - I would love to see you go all out on a piece because your writing seems to leave me wanting more, essentially this was the case here, you built up an intriguing character and put forth some great imagery, yet you didn't put enough on the table for everyone to get what you wrote. Granted I don't encourage people to dumb things down, but I feel that you could have built the piece more to add strength to the character development, although I basically figured the character as the devil.

Anyway, I think mem had a piece that to me was more creative and intriguing.

vote = Memento.