[Got Life?]

Star - I mean this verse was clear cut for what it was and had a couple cool images throughout it, but at the same time, you really had no sense of direction with this entire piece. To boot your mechanics were extremely sloppy as you did not show much thought or ingenuity behind this piece, it felt thrown together and bland. Definitely keep at it and elevate though.

Meta - this was kinda cool, I mean, I'm the "gore" guy around here so when you deal with my standards on something like this you're never going to really hit the top notch, but at the same time the way I see it is this piece showed a lot more effort and better imagery than that of your opponent. What I'd focus on in the future if I were you is character development, stronger emotion, better flow, and making the piece less "elaborate"...it seems you put to much effort into masking what was going on which took a little away from the clarity of the piece.

vote = Meta.