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Star - this wasn't a weak verse but it has it's faults .. the mechanics were all in and around the 'average' .. nothing shone from this piece .. it was a forgetable verse .. I don't mean this to sound harsh .. cos the verse was consistent with the level it started and ended with .. it's just that that consistent wasn't set too high .. not bad .. but uninspired and a bit flat ..
Meta - basically .. you blew your opponent out of the proverbial water .. I don't want to over hype .. but in my personal opinion .. this was pretty hot .. the story .. the feel .. even the mechanics .. all on point .. verse of the week from what I've read so far (this is my 3rd battle) .. and that's saying something cos there are some nice pieces going down this week .. really enjoyed this ..
Vote = MetaSin .. obviously? .. lol .. well .. I do mean it when I say I don't want to "overhype" .. cos this verse was not a 10/10 piece .. but it certainly is a strong story piece if not the strongest open mic (mechanics) .. great imagery and very solid .. had that creepy "Saw" feel to it and I highly enjoyed reading it ..
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