|
hmmmm,
Tek is good from this point of view. i can really hear em like a narraation from a movie or something. i actually enjoyed this. it was well written, and emotion was right on.
yet Got- at first i thought it was about a pimp. but then i thought it was comedy. but after all three girls i realized it was just a dude that had three girls, but the whole baby thing was kinda quick, and the ending kinda left me empty. like he did it????? but he didnt remember and he thought it was home girl that was pregnat or.....iono....any way
vote-gl
only cause i just enoyd reading his more......that is all
any way tek i always like reading your shit you as well are a great writer.
|