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wow.
Dad, awsome peice, in my opinon, i liked the whole code thing, it gave me something to and ended the story in with perfection. your flow is right on, i could easily read this with out, having to go back and re-read. very very creative since i been in the leauge i havent that.
Vada-how can anything you do look bad? i mean you flow is nice, its always creativce, and you have a nice way of tie'n things together. the whole ending though was kinda......what? i mean i get it but, wasnt where i thought you where going...... but then again i cant say nothing bad about your shit.
vote-dad
i somply enjoyed his peice more.....thats all
nothing personal
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