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DAD came with that shit. He is always very creative. I think this is another instance of him being creative. Good flow, good storyline. I think you could develop your plots a little more thoroughly, and not even the plot more so character familiarization and background. I am a fan of your writing and this was a pretty cool piece, definitely no disappointment to end the season on. Vada killed it this week in my opinion. He didn't even dumb down the verse like he typically does and I think that's what makes him, him. Because recently he was dumbing down to much and I was like this isn't Vern. Welcome back. Dope flow, dope story, and shit was nice. Can't wait to see what you bring next week against Got Life?.
Vote - Vada.
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"Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home.
He knows only The Cause."
Win or Die.
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