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Okay this is a matter of self preference. There is no possible way to choose a definite winner because depending where each of us our, and our viewpoints is how we will vote. S. Issue this was a good piece from you. I like the flow. I think you have raw imagery also duke. The thing I was dissatisfied with was your transitioning, it wasn't smooth at all. It's almost as if you were writing something, stopped, came back to it at a later date and executed with a different thought. RICO, I knew you were fooling around with us all along. You came to the battle with your end of the deal. This was a solid piece, I wasn't a big fan of the structure but it definitely wasn't too much of a big deal. I like where you took it. Very morally sound. Very effective, and enough to get the vote from me.
Vote - RICO
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"Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home.
He knows only The Cause."
Win or Die.
Still want to quit?
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