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Q: wrote the same damn thing everyone else wrote. Geezus, I was hoping it didn't go in the direction it was going in. I will step out of my egotistical zone and say I am truly a fan of your flow. I hadn't realized how nice it was until recently. Your mechanics are pretty good too. Your story was..... not. I know you know that the creativity portion was just absent here. Everything else beside the story was great though. I even loved the imagery.
L Dogg: Your piece was a breath of fresh air to me. I literally sighed with thankfulness, because the rest of the league wrote some rhetoric bullshit. But good story man. I can definitely appreciate what you did here. The execution of tying the pic into the last lines were dope. The mechanics were presentable, the only thing I would change is that hideous font.
Vote - L Dogg just a breath of fresh air here.
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"Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home.
He knows only The Cause."
Win or Die.
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