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LoK: I just want to say I can see the emotion and the need for this piece. You wrote for yourself, and that's nice to see. On the other hand, you have us voters here, and we're are yearning for more substance. Something to make the 3-4 minutes to fully read and understand more enjoyable. After all we are humans, and it is in our nature to be selfish. So I think that's why it didn't workout honestly bro. I enjoyed it. Because I know what it is to truly write.
Trybz: I was waiting to see if you were going to show up, and see what you brought. I think your piece was pretty decent. I want to see Trybz at full force because if you keep writing how you wrote against GL you may be on your way to the final four with the way these brackets are set up. The piece was the same rhetorical shit, but slightly twisted. The thing that I liked was like mound said, it was actually a decent ending instead of depressing. I would like to see a part two just to see how the kid turns out and everything. Flow was cool too. See ya next week.
Vote - Trybz
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"Somewhere a True Believer is training to kill you. He is training with minimal food or water, in austere conditions, training day and night. The only thing clean on him is his weapon. He doesn't worry about what workout to do - his ruck weighs what it weighs, his runs end when the enemy stops chasing him. This True Believer is not concerned about 'how hard it is;' he knows either he wins or dies. He doesn't go home at 17:00, he is home.
He knows only The Cause."
Win or Die.
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