[Lord Drama]

this shit is almost too close to call

SI... nice drop this week.. there was a lot of detail in your lines and each one unravled a new idea and direction, showing where it was going. The story was itself common, specially this week, as there have been a lot of the same molest things goin on in peoples verses, but solid drop.

Rico... this is the best I seen you drop as of late.. I really enjoyed the story as a whole, and thought that you did a good job conveying it. I liked how you incorperated the education factor and a girl bound for success and the downfall of doing something bad, that you didnt really want to do in the first place.. this was def a piece in proper moral, even if the story's end is negative.

Vote Rico for a more gripping story that was constructed in a way that makes a reader think about moral and how one views it in its own sense.. although SI's piece is like that too in a way.. so it really is an even match with one story appearing better to me. good shit dudes