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Cool match,
Lucifa, I liked your verse. There was a lot of emotion in your lines and the feelings came across well for me as a reader. I would have liked to see more of a story develope out of your feelings being portrayed.
Trybz .. I felt you had just as much emotion in your piece as your oponents, but the thing that put it above it was the story that went with it. The story gave all the emotion a place and meaning and it left the verse feeling complete as I finished reading. nice stuff
vote trybz
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3lit3
University of Washington
Drama's RSTL GRADE REPORT:
A 95-100% | A- 90-94% | B 85-89% | B- 80-84% | C 75-79%
C- 70-74% | D 65-69% | D- 60-64% | F 59% and below
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