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this is a good match
Tek.. I liked the piece man..good descriptions...although I didnt know what beat you wrote to, it was written well and I had no trouble staying with it with no music..The story would have been just as effective had it not been true. nothing really bad to say about this piece for me, but it the theme wasnt that original.
Gotlife.. I felt you came more creative this week then tek. The story was kinda wierd, but it worked. You seemed to be able to carry the story across to each description of each girl and then conclude with climax. Comparing it to teks, it seems more thought out and complete as a story and was more interesting for me to read.
vote gotlife
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3lit3
University of Washington
Drama's RSTL GRADE REPORT:
A 95-100% | A- 90-94% | B 85-89% | B- 80-84% | C 75-79%
C- 70-74% | D 65-69% | D- 60-64% | F 59% and below
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