[Lord Drama]

vote the return

I liked the way the story was told.. the ease of the wording, how natural the lines carry to the next, something which you seem to carry in each verse you write... although there was some lines like "dashing for hopes" that i didnt think worked.. the story theme itself was kinda plain and felt typical, but it was put together in a complete way.


Apogee, I liked the idea, thought it was better thought out then oponents, but all the lines had real quick instances where things would switch up real quick.. setting up each line to fit the next would have made it easyer for me to grasp all the things occuring in your verse.. without it, I had trouble following everything..cool drop though.