[TheReturn]

DAD - Ok, I've said how I feel about the cipher. Honestly, it wouldn't be that bad of an idea if the verse itself was worthy of it. I was just so bored through the read that I got to the code and was like "are you kidding me?" and gave up. Now that Got Life? has decoded it, I'm glad that I didn't spend my time doing it. Just not a verse that really offered very much entertainment in my opinion.

Vada - Much better written, much better flow, idea was good but the ending wasn't done well in my opinion. If it was a second daughter you certainly never mentioned her, and the fact that the mother would kill her own daughter in the same manner (or any manner for that matter) is just weird and kind of unrealistic. If the mother was the killer, why was she spending all her time chasing the killer? That would be some schitzophrenic type shit, but honestly it doesn't even matter because the piece as a whole was more than enough to get my vote over DAD's piece.

So, vote = vada.